Had some great feedback on Max Stone from the people in the Stripes Publishing House in London and they suggested opening the story with a new first chapter…
KRÄÄXOR, feared leader of the Kaemon Klann, fumed his reptilian rage. The pitiful creatures of Zirdon had foiled his attempt to crush them from existence and so wipe their planet from the Galaxy of Stars. He and his Lizard Warriors desperately needed freedom from Zirdon, to roam the universe and plunder and pillage as they sought fit.
But no! These wretched Tribes had risen against him, and now he was bound to this hated planet until he could find a way of destroying the Star of Zirdon. Read More